My First Story, Um, Titled…”What’s That?”
I decided to write a quick story, it’s non-fiction and since everyone who knows of me online should know that I don’t really read a lot of books except science related books.
First, a brief life update is that, I ate some food and I’m not starving anymore so that’s why I’m posting again so early. I’m still poor though, and I think I’m not getting one of my college grants but time will tell, either way college is paid for, so I’m good. And, I’m thirsty.
Try not to speed read, cause the story is really short because I don’t have all day to write a novel. And remember that this story is copyrighted to don’t even THINK about it lol.
The main characters are Selena and Chris and “the thing?”. It’s paginated, so click on the page numbers below to continue the story!
Disclaimer: I have always sucked at writing stories, no joke
That was …. disturbing.
I love the way you jump between past and present tense almost line by line.
It was pretty awesome.
I’m beginning to suspect you will make millions from your stories – millions of what? Is the question though!
well…that was my, intention! to go from past and present tense. That’s what makes the story so unique and million dollar worthy
Thanks for reading
THEY REHE RETOK ILLPER SONSNow this is what I call amusing. The message thing with the wrong spaces is very original, and I didn’t “put two and two together” until Selena did. So, not predictable.
Nice little animation, if not a little distorted with the, uh … thingies around the monster’s face. Still, it seems I better un-lazy myself and animate something before you become the better animator.
By the way … the character names … any relation to the Selena I know best? She also married a guy named Chris.
Keep on writing!
Of course I named it after Selena, she’s my favorite singer since I was 10yrs old and my fake name in HS Spanish class turned me into a diva lol, and Chris is named after that Chris.
Yeah, the animation thing…couldn’t make a normal mouth and didn’t feel retrying, then I figured monsters are supposed to look weird and there’s supposed to be electro background music but it did get on the file for some reason.
I wont be writing any other story for a long time, toooo much thinking involved like seriously the Illper sons thing took lots of brain power for me. And, yeah, hurry up and finish or show an animation,
you have 4 day breaks for crying out loudYou know, my sister was a really, really big fan of Selena back then, and even followed her fashion style. Not so much now, though.
What you could do with the story is write a screenplay based on it and sell it to the Hollywood people! Ka-ching!
I’ll have plenty of time for animating after August. My goal is to make something before the year ends!
I couldn’t do the clothing as much but I was able to do the long hair/bangs, red lipstick, and tried to talk like her but I think I went too heavy on the accent, I probably looked stupid, but it was fun
I have little knowledge on screenplay, only read Shakespeare and the Odessey, and looks like a lot of work for someone who isn’t trying to be a screenplay writer and Hollywood wouldn’t touch it, btw shouldn’t you be in California or did that UP thing already happen?
My next idea for a story that I got from my last post was to do a sort of greek mythology thing internet version, but that takes too long and too much thinking plus I’d likely get my facts wrong. But, maybe I’ll do an Origin/Theogony version and include Al Gore and create a Blender Al Gore…which would probably look similar to the monster above.
Nah, I’m not supposed to go there. If I were to go, I’d do whatever possible to not come back! I am supposed to get a signed poster, but it hasn’t arrived yet.
You are allowed to get some facts (or “facts”) wrong. It’s called creative freedom, something that the religious folk didn’t understand in regards to The Da Vinci Code. So, go ahead and write that Greek-Internet thing!
So this is your first story. Selena.. nice name & whoooa that’s a scary youtube video
I think I’ll have to make my monster too
I know, I’m going to name my future daughter Selena lol Yeah, you should make a monster, but dont make it too scary cause I actually dont like scary stuff